I was scrolling through Instagram and came across a post from Kamala Harris’s office that started On behalf of the second gentleman and I, we would like to wish you… .
Ouch.
I had that same reaction when I opened a letter whose first line was On behalf of myself... (Read More)
The sign at the United Airlines’ ticket counter in Mexico City read, The United States is denying entry for non-U.S. citizens who have visited various countries within the last 14 days, unless you are a lawful permanent resident.
Can you detect the problem?
It’s in the latter half of the... (Read More)
Senior-level women—tough, tested, ambitious leaders—are being pushed to their limits and beyond.
That’s what Sheryl Sandberg wrote in a cautionary editorial about the number of women leaving the workforce or taking less stressful jobs because of the pandemic. Sandberg’s concern is legitimate, but I paused at and beyond. Why not... (Read More)
Big Tech is Watching You
Who is Watching Big Tech?
That ominous headline jumped out at me—for its menacing message and the incorrect way it is formatted. In both lines, the word is should be capitalized.
Many people think all little words should be lowercased in... (Read More)
I recently received an out-of-office reply that read, I and the whole team are at an off-site meeting this week, so checking email is going to be a little difficult.
The writer should have written, The team and I are at an off-site meeting, because you always put yourself last... (Read More)
Ivanka Trump was talking recently about the success of the Administration’s worker retraining program. “15 million lives impacted, 15 million families impacted,” she said.
Ouch.
Impact, traditionally a noun, as in have an impact on, has turned into a verb (one shunned by stylists everywhere), pushing aside more human-sounding verbs,... (Read More)
The head of our Health and Human Services department recently clocked in with a 61-word sentence about the Administration’s decision to ban certain e-cigarette flavors while keeping others. Here’s what he said. See if you can fully grasp it in one quick read:
By prioritizing enforcement against the products that... (Read More)
In this version of Say It Better Say It Right, a Hollywood producer talks about creating a binge-worthy series for Netflix.
Here are two sentences that recently crossed my desk:
In both cases, everyday should be every day.
Everyday is an adjective that is mostly used to describe something routine... (Read More)
Our legacy is built on finding and knowing the essential.
That’s what a leading financial company says on its website. Expertise or reputation would be more accurate than legacy, which is what you’re remembered for after you’re gone.
Or take the magazine executive who said he wanted to be sure... (Read More)
