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Put People in the Action

  • Category: Say It Better. Say It Right
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  • On October 6, 2020

In this example, a doctor talks about the unusual symptoms of COVID-19 and how medical professionals need to understand them better. Hear the difference when people are attached to the concept of awareness. The sentence becomes clearer—and more human-sounding, too.

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