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Verb Tense Trumps “The Donald”—and a Lot of Other People, Too

  • Category: Uncategorized, Write
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  • On August 26, 2015

“He’s a friend of mine, but he missed his time,” Donald Trump said of New Jersey Governor Chris Christie. “If he would have done it four years ago, he would have beaten Romney.”

The “it” obviously refers to the presidential run the governor didn’t make in 2012, so that... (Read More)

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Deep-seeded or Deep-seated?

  • Category: Review, Uncategorized
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  • On August 19, 2015

These two sentences came across my desk the other day. Only one is correct. Which one is it?

• In 1915, the company formally established its travel business and has built it, year by year, on the deep-seeded values of trust, security and service.

• Private commercial bankers are... (Read More)

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“True” and “Truly,” “Incredible” and “Incredibly” Can Detract From What You’re Saying

  • Category: Edit, Uncategorized
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  • On August 12, 2015

When the Eagles rock band learned it was among this year’s Kennedy Center honorees, the group’s musicians issued a statement saying they were truly humbled. A school that surpassed its fund-raising goal said the sum was a true testament to the incomparable educational experience it offers. A company I patronize... (Read More)

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When Did “Gift” Become a Verb (and Why Is “Wants” a Noun?)

  • Category: Uncategorized, Write
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  • On August 4, 2015

I can gift my air miles to a friend and earn even more for myself. If I go to a certain museum gala later this month, I’ll be gifted with a light linen beach cover-up. And come February, retailers everywhere will ask me what I want to gift my Valentine.... (Read More)

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Leave “Lean In” to Sheryl Sandberg

  • Category: Uncategorized, Write
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  • On August 3, 2015

Melissa Rivers was being interviewed about the book she wrote about her mother, Joan Rivers (I know Joan crops up a lot in my bulletins—it’s not intentional), who was well known for having lots of plastic surgery.

“Does that make you lean in to plastic surgery—and things like that... (Read More)

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Every Day, Everyday

  • Category: Review, Uncategorized
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  • On July 22, 2015

I opened the travel section of the Sunday New York Times the other day to a full page advertisement for the state of Florida. Say yes to sun day, everyday, read the copy over a picture of two kids frolicking in a pool under sunny skies.

Problem is, it should... (Read More)

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Write Simply. Sound Smarter.

  • Category: Uncategorized, Write
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  • On June 27, 2015

“You Really Look  Smart,” read a recent Wall Street Journal headline. The article it headed described behaviors that make people look smart. Using clear language, the article said, is one such behavior. This is welcome advice for business communicators everywhere. One of the biggest traps businesspeople fall into is using big words... (Read More)

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How to Close Emails

  • Category: Uncategorized, Write
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  • On June 24, 2015

Bloomberg Businessweek recently ran a story about how to close emails. Do you say Best, All best, Sincerely, Sincerely yours—or any of the many words and phrases we have long used to end correspondence? According to Rebecca Greenfield, the Bloomberg reporter, the answer is none of the above.

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Few Things Are Iconic

  • Category: Edit, Uncategorized
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  • On June 21, 2015

My neighborhood Equinox is being renovated, and the gym has posted a sign in the entry letting us know what one of the chain’s “most iconic sites” has in store for us.

Iconic is one of those words—unique is another—that gets applied way too liberally, particularly by overzealous brand... (Read More)

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Business Mumbo Jumbo

  • Category: Uncategorized, Write
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  • On June 17, 2015

A revolt took place at The New Republic last month. A new editor came in and out marched a troop of veteran editors and staff members.

In the first of many articles about the strife, The New York Times cited something the magazine’s new chief executive said in a memo... (Read More)

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